rite are back story is a little wrong so heres the new version, im just about to send it to dragon plot. So let me know soon if you want it changed please.
. I’ve decided to write this as a list of events rather than a story that can come later once were all happy with the details.
Leabarn is a small fortified village with a smaller village just outside its walls. Its situated in a valley in mullingar and during the harsh winters is cut off by snow. The people of Leabarn never really joined the army of the dragon but often allowed soldiers to stay in the town and let the soldiers teach them to fight. During the winter six years ago the town was cut off once more. After a few weeks strange things started to happen and the village was attacked by undead. Eventually the town itself was starting to be attacked so they sent out for help. No messengers came back but a body was found floating down the river.
The body was of a man and he was still alive but only just. The man had a fever and it lasted four days in total. Once the fever broke the man seemed to recover from his wounds very fast apart from his left hand which was withered and pale. The man said he was a soldier and his name was Phedes. He trained up the towns people very fast and showed the people how to gain the power to heal by drawing powers from the plane of life. Phedes led a scout party to see where the undead were coming from. There he saw a red hooded figure walking through the undead and not being attacked. Phedes returned to the town and within a day he devised a plan. The bulk of the towns people were to fight the undead in a battle just outside the town, whilst Phedes led an attack squad to go and fight the red hooded figure. The towns people fought long and hard and eventually defeated the undead. Once they had beaten them they ran to aid Phedes. Once they got their, they found the attack squad dead and Phedes lying on the floor with a mortal wound. The red hooded figure was also severely injured so the towns people easily finished him off. Unfortunately because of the heavy loss of the battle all thje towns peoples healing powers were depleted and so he died. The next few years were spent regrowing the town, and replenishing stock. Just before the Gathering 1106, a soldier who used to stay in the town regulary returned. His name was Meranti of the green company. He gathered the best fighters and healers in the town and took them to meet sir danci bold the green company leader. There they joined in with the green company for the gathering 1106 and were trained up. During the feast it was decided that the children of Phedes would split from the green company and become an independent unit.
When Leabarn is cut off during the winter they rely on the leadership of the towns elders. The towns people worship Phedes as their savoir although they nothing about him but his name and the fact he was a soldier. Whilst out with the war band the Children of Phedes are trying to continue what Phedes was doing by fighting for the dragon and also in the hope that they find out more information about this great man.
Ive suggested that he be a paladin, arvator or just simply a soldier. but told them they can choose and we can find out IC.
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I would only suggest changing the begining. The town is new(remember Mullingar was cleared out), make it a little smaller then you suggest. We came recently and picked the site because it was so isolated, we had 2 years of peace (enougth to build the town) and then were attacked.
Dont mention us not joining the dragons armies, makes us seem standoffish. Part of the reason we are there was to support the dragon armies.
The strike squad were the children of Phedes. We were the survivors of the squad, he took all those that could heal with him. We were all down and wounded and he was killed. The villagers turned up and finished the job.
Apart from that I like.
Haskeer
rite ok that all seems ok, ill c what i can do with it.
